People have requested constructive criticism in the past, and when it was given, the giver was attacked, by other members. One time, not very long ago, the giver was attacked by the OP. Really, why ask for that kind of advice if you just want to be lavished in praise.
I think that what you are trying to do for yourself is great, but allow me to suggest that if you really want constructive criticism of that extreme, you request that people send you a PM instead. That way there's no fighting, and you will get the honest opinions you crave.
Send me a PM anytime, and ask my opinion. I'll be happy to help you improve on your skills any way I can.