Tell me what you think CCers
THank you!
OOPS I FOrgot to put the Link
Cakebypaulasurrette.com
my god are you good. wow. Would you mind if i email you. I am going to be teaching a basic cake decorating classes in the fall ( 3 Classes) and was hoping for some advice.
that link is not working for me but I clicked on your www button and got to the webshots page. Is that the site? Either way there are some fantastic cakes there. You do beautiful work.
Paula, your site looks good. The main thing I noticed was the town Bridgewater was mentioned 6 or 7 times on the main page.
Also, instead of several paragraphs saying the same thing. You might do one main story that isn't so long. And you said, Paula, I, and cakes by Paula, you may want to pick one or two. I would not post starwars licensed cakes either, unless you are licensed to sell them, or a disclamer noted. Good luck, I hope you don't mind my thoughts.
Hi Paula,
very nice site... I'm picky when I go to a site and the first thing I notice is misspelled words or other things of that nature. Here's what I noticed:
If you have any questions, in regards, let me know, and I will be glad to answer them. in regards to what?
If you dont find what your looking for please feel free to contact me I am always looking for a new challenge. the word don't is lacking the apostrophe.
I would also change the wording to contact me as I am always looking...
I did find other misspelled words or left out commas and such. Sorry to be so nitpicky but you are a professional and should be represented as such on your website too. I hope this helps a little.
Also the Boob cake...might want to be careful how you post those types of cakes, people can sometimes be quite offended.
Other than that, the set up and the ease of getting around your site is excellent.
Paula, nice site. I would like to see that awesome cake you made for David Ortiz on there somewhere! I know it's not one you would offer to make for somebody; but it is just so "noteworthy"!
I also like the site..there are a few typos such as home page--wont-won't; flavor page--specail-special. On the chart it looks as if you get a 6" that is the only flavor and filling you can get.
Wedding cake page--the picture with daisies should state off not of.
Contact page--capitialize your company name.
Testimonials--you should state what they say in "" then there name at the end.
Sorry to be picky just want you to flurish in your endevor.
Amy
It looks really nice Paula. I found out why some can't get to it with the link you provided. There's an "s" in there that shouldn't be.
Here's the address that shows up on the webpage:
www.cakebypaulasurrette.com
I like it a lot. My suggestion would be to move the "naughty" cake into it's own category. That way people know what that are going to see when they click on the link. Otherwise it is a little surprising....you dont really notice any of the other cakes then!
Thank you all for your help and suggestions. I have a headache from all this. I feel like I cant see the mistakes anymore. If you see any that I haven't fixed please let me know I certainly dont mind.
Thank you!
Paula
I just have to say, i love your baseball cake, that is great. you have been very busy. great job.
Paula....looks wonderful! Congrats! I'm also adding a seperate page to my site to plaster licensed cakes I've done for family and friends....don't want to get in trouble by the copyright police!
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