My Cake Is Missing A Slice!

My Cake Is Missing A Slice! on Cake Central

Lots of inspiration from other cakes on cc! Thank you! Had some bad color decisions and my slice fell apart a little bit. But, other than that I feel good about the design. Oh! On the bottom where the slice is missing it looks like my bc is all messed up...that's a reflection in the paper, very strange! Thanks for looking! I am a Critique Group Member, all comments are welcome! :D

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I love this cake. You did a great job with it. No flaws that i can see. I don't know how you do it..it looks perfect!

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Critique subgroup member: I love it! Did you make those candles? I have always wanted to do a cake like this. I love the colors! I would have chosen a different ribbon for the cake board. Something a bit more "fun"! Other than that minute detail, this is fantastic!

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Critique Subgroup Member: I think this is really good! You choose your colours well. The candles are really nice and I think the pink around your board just pulls everything together! :D :D

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critique subgroup member: very cute cake! I like the icing colors, except where the piece was cut out and the cut out piece should have been a cake color and not matching the icing color to look more like a piece cut out! Those candles are "the bomb" and your star border (though not one of my favorite borders) is nicely piped, very evenly sized and space! over all... adorable!

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Critique Subgroup Member. Great job. I like the flames on your candles. The colors work together very well. I think a polka-dot ribbon around the board would have jazzed that up a bit.

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just to let everyone know...the bad color choice WAS the color for the cake...that did not go over very well and that's why it ended up green like the rest of the cake...thanks for all the wonderful comments everyone! Even thought I was rusty I feel very proud of this cake! :D

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critique subgroup member: I love love love this cake!!! it's fabulous! nice and bright and perfectly executed :)

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Critique Subgroup Member: This came out so cute! I agree about the "cake" color, but the other colors I love. The board is covered with nice paper. I think the candles are my favorite!

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also...the blue candle is for the dad. This family was celebrating twin bdays along with dad...I wanted to incorporate him into this very girly cake! LOL

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critique group member: So cute!! Other than the flaws that you pointed out, I think you did a great job!! Oh, I do think that the cake board could have been different; a little bit more fun to go with the cake!!

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Critique subgroup member: Fab cake the colors are so retro! Personally have issues eating green cake, childhood issue I had, but overall love this design. The candles are a bit wonky but who cares because it is fun, fun, fun. Hints for the future, move on from the star border, it is too elementry and smacks of "beginner". And besides, your design deserve the very best!

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Critique Group Member: What a FUN cake...and your candles are simply fabulous!! Even the cake board is the perfect size...nice, nice work ;-D