very pretty bow , i love it!

Great job!! Love that color

Now that's a bow! I love it!

like the cake...but the bow is a bit mish-mashy? (I hope it's okay I said that...not to offend, just trying to help!) It may be easier if you construct it like this...8 loops in a circle as the base, 5 in a circle on top of that , 3 on top of that, then one loop right in the middle on top.

what does mish-mashy mean?

The bow is too tall and thin...it looks stacked. It should be rounded and circular...like a gift bow you buy at the store? Much more rounded and even. (Hope that helps!)