Critique Subgroup Member: Another beautiful cake! The writting is very fitting, love the bookmark/ribbon and the gold edges of the book! :D

Critique subgroup member: What a beautiful cake. That pink ribbon looks so real!!!! :o :o The "m" looks like it's lower case compared to the R of her middle name. It took me a minute to figure out that the brown around the book is actually the book itself! Only thing I would have done different to the front and back of the book is make the sides more concave. Not too much for slightly! That's just my weirdness but other than that. This is absolutely lovely especially those pages!!!

Okay, that doesn't make any sense. I meant while making the cover more concave "not too much, just slightly"! Sorry 'bout that.

love the colors. Gold edges on the book look great.

critique subgroup member: What a pretty cake. The writing looks nice and the spacing seems just right. I like the authenticity of the pages curling. Thr ribbon is wonderful and the cake's whole presentation is lovely.

Critique Subgroup Member. Another pretty cake. I like the pink ribbon. The gold dusting on the pages is great.

critique member: again, another beautiful cake! the only thing that I would say I would like different is the pink roses on the left to be a bit bigger...and your goblet on the right to be down a little more. Other than that I really like the style of this cake!

critique subgroup member: I like this, it's really pretty and very girly. The writing is lovely, I'd like to master this font. The only thing I don't much care for is the cover of the book. It looks too large for the pages...maybe it's just me? But the rest of it is just gorgeous.

Critique subgroup member: Yes, I have to agree about the cover being too large. Other than that, your cake is perfect! great work

Critique Subgroup Member: Beautiful cake! I love everything! The only little nit-picky thing is that the cover looks as though it could be a little more straight. And perhaps the bottom part of the cover should be thinner? But that is really being picky - I love this!!

Critique subgroup member: Lovely cake and I really like the "pop-up" aspect. I'm thinking that the book cover is too large. I'd open a book about that size and see what it looks like. However, it doesn't detract from the lovely design.

Critique group member: Wow this is so cute! I love the gold edges of the pages and the roses!