critique subgroup member: Great work on the FBCT! it is adorable and great colors. I like the chocolate pony, but think the base could have been a little neater with a more finished look! Now this may be the picture, but it seems like I can see the cake and crumbs through the icing?? make sure crumbs and cake don't show through! Now on this one the cake board could have been bigger, rule of thumb.. allow 2" bigger than cake. overall... adorable
Critique Subgroup Member: Great job on the FBCT. I think I see a few tiny holes in the wings. I personally thing the pink/blue border around the transfer is a bit too bright. I also see a few crumbs peeking through on the side of the cake. Your top border looks great--evenly spaced. I like the reverse shell design.
critique group member: your FBCT is amazing! I have never done one and YOURS is very nice. I would've like to see where you chocolate pony was going to be. and that is so adorable. I too believe I can see crumbs, maybe not enough frosting and I would've like to see the cake higher (2") make sure you are filling your pans 1/2-2/3 full even if you have to use more batter than suggested. your reverse shell is wonderful and so is the border around the fbct...I would like to see blue/pink on the border on the
Critique subgroup member: Again very nice handwriting! Love the accent color. Your modeled pony is sweet, but don't care for the clump holding it up. Again board is wrong size - my pet peeve again. Sorry. BTW pretty smooth icing on top. What is going on in the left hand corner? Is that cake showing through? Your reverse shell is very nice!
critique subgroup member: It sounds repetitive now that others have commented, so I'll just say ditto about the crumbs and the cake board. I love your pony- very cute. I would have cleaned up the base of it and went back with a thin layer of chocolate to cover the toothpicks. Your transfer is wonderful and I, personally, like the colors for the border of it- makes it pop a little :)
Critique subgroup member: Cute pony and fbct. The wings of the pony seem kind of heavy, but the face is sweet. Great writing. Smooth icing, but I have the same comment as others about the crumbs. I like the vibrant colors -- it works for this theme I think. Nice cake overall!
Critique group member: Cute! The FBCT looks great! Once again though your borders are looking a little sloppy, the reverse scrolls looked a little smashed togther and the shells need more definition. You can check out the reverse scrolls in my blue daisy cake if you want to see the way I do them.
critique subgroup member: How fun! I really like the FBCT. The colors are great and it is very well done. I like the border around it, and think it would have been fun to have a two tone border around the outside top and bottom of the cake as well. As mentioned, the bc looks a little thin on the left side and I agree that the pony's wings seem a little thick. Other than that, it's very nice and I'm sure it made a birthday girl quite happy on her special day.
critique group member: Your FBCT is very nice - not sure about the border on it. Perhaps using a smaller white tip to border the FBCT and using the blue/pink on the outside cake border would be better? The pink/blue FBCT border is so close to the pony that it takes away from it. Love the modelled horse!
way to go...this is a great looking cake!!
critique subgroup member: Great work on the FBCT! it is adorable and great colors. I like the chocolate pony, but think the base could have been a little neater with a more finished look! Now this may be the picture, but it seems like I can see the cake and crumbs through the icing?? make sure crumbs and cake don't show through! Now on this one the cake board could have been bigger, rule of thumb.. allow 2" bigger than cake. overall... adorable
Critique Subgroup Member: Great job on the FBCT. I think I see a few tiny holes in the wings. I personally thing the pink/blue border around the transfer is a bit too bright. I also see a few crumbs peeking through on the side of the cake. Your top border looks great--evenly spaced. I like the reverse shell design.
critique group member: your FBCT is amazing! I have never done one and YOURS is very nice. I would've like to see where you chocolate pony was going to be. and that is so adorable. I too believe I can see crumbs, maybe not enough frosting and I would've like to see the cake higher (2") make sure you are filling your pans 1/2-2/3 full even if you have to use more batter than suggested. your reverse shell is wonderful and so is the border around the fbct...I would like to see blue/pink on the border on the
con't...pink/blue border on the bottom so that the cake design doesn't seem top heavy. Again, very nice cake overall! Writing is also nice!
Critique subgroup member: Again very nice handwriting! Love the accent color. Your modeled pony is sweet, but don't care for the clump holding it up. Again board is wrong size - my pet peeve again. Sorry. BTW pretty smooth icing on top. What is going on in the left hand corner? Is that cake showing through? Your reverse shell is very nice!
critique subgroup member: It sounds repetitive now that others have commented, so I'll just say ditto about the crumbs and the cake board. I love your pony- very cute. I would have cleaned up the base of it and went back with a thin layer of chocolate to cover the toothpicks. Your transfer is wonderful and I, personally, like the colors for the border of it- makes it pop a little :)
Critique subgroup member: Cute pony and fbct. The wings of the pony seem kind of heavy, but the face is sweet. Great writing. Smooth icing, but I have the same comment as others about the crumbs. I like the vibrant colors -- it works for this theme I think. Nice cake overall!
Critique group member: Cute! The FBCT looks great! Once again though your borders are looking a little sloppy, the reverse scrolls looked a little smashed togther and the shells need more definition. You can check out the reverse scrolls in my blue daisy cake if you want to see the way I do them.
critique subgroup member: How fun! I really like the FBCT. The colors are great and it is very well done. I like the border around it, and think it would have been fun to have a two tone border around the outside top and bottom of the cake as well. As mentioned, the bc looks a little thin on the left side and I agree that the pony's wings seem a little thick. Other than that, it's very nice and I'm sure it made a birthday girl quite happy on her special day.
critique group member: Your FBCT is very nice - not sure about the border on it. Perhaps using a smaller white tip to border the FBCT and using the blue/pink on the outside cake border would be better? The pink/blue FBCT border is so close to the pony that it takes away from it. Love the modelled horse!