Actually, you did an awesome job for your first attempt at a bow...you have made the big loops beautifully and if I could just add that if you pleated the middle loop a little just the way you did the big ones and then wound it around, it would just give it a bit more realism..but honestly pat yourself on the back..super work and the overall cake is so pretty!!! :)

I think you did a great job. My only critique would be that I would have pinched the ends at the top that are supposed to be coming from the center 'knot'. Other than that - a fine bow!