Wow! Gorgeous!!! Love every detail.!!! Especially how the package actually seems wrapped... I mean the ends being folded........ great idea!!!

I wish I had folded the ends on the brown one too. It was a whole lot easier than making sharp corners with the chocolate clay. I'll remember that if I ever do another one :wink:

Looks absolutely perfect to me. Really neat looking.

Another really great cake by you! Only thing I think is out of place is the long tail on the top bow. I didn't know you could rollout modeling clay to cover a cake this big - thanks for the technique as I like the taste better than fondant but have only used for roses.

I'll definitely make the next bows shorter. Thank for all the suggestions.

I think the big bow on top is magnificent! And I love the folds in the blue cake. Also, I'm really impressed with creasing you did on the brown cake's edges- very nice!!

Critique Group Member: Great job on this cake.. (my son is a Collin with two L's too so I had to awwwwwe).. The blue tier looks just like a package.. love the folded sides. I agree that the bow loops are a bit long and that makes it hard to arrange them, but over all this cake is too cute for words. :)

Yippee gift tag and not writing on the cake. Love it. Your bows is nice. But your taf should be thinner like paper. I got a tag cookie cutter from ebay and loved it the minute I got it. I'm thinking the board should be a bit bigger also. I recently got advice that it sould be 2 - 3 inches larger. :wink:

I meant tag not taf

great job! bow is nicely done! each loop is perfect and identical to the next. The bow tails are a bit long. I like the wrapped paper lines added to the blue package and would have liked to see that on the brown package also.. lends a very realistic appearance. I am not really partial to the colors, but understand that was what the Mom ordered. Again your cakes are so nicely square and level!